Outline

I need to work on my outline because I don't want to get behind. If I spend too much time trying to find new questions and add to my notes I'll get behind on my outline. I need to finish putting what I already have of my notes into my outline. I would like to get my paper done as well but not sure if thats the best idea. Ms. King stated not to turn in a paper unless its great quality. Because I know I'm not done finding all of my questions, the essay won't sound the way I wanted it to. I can always add to my essay during my break and next trimester when we come back from break. As of now I'm going to do what I can, and then I'll go from there.

Outline and Notes

I was having trouble finding more information about the Chinese method as well as their embalming process. Ms. King was kind enough to send me some links to some good articles. I have been working on my Outline as well as adding to my notes. I would have just decided to work strictly on finishing my notes but did not want to get behind. The only thing I'm worried about at this point is the paper. Being that I'm working on my notes and my outline, I worry if I will be able to turn in a paper. I have taken out questions because the questions were not broad enough. There was information but not enough for three paragraphs worth, and most most of the information was repetitive. So I decided to just get rid of couple of questions, and hopefully will be able to come up with new questions. As of now I'm doing my outline with the notes that I already do have, and hopefully next year I'll be able to add to my Essay as well as the outline.